Part Two

Writing Strategies
1. When Bosley explained each and every person to almost exact, thats where it was eye catching. Mainly, people want to know those kind of details to get a better understanding of who each character is and a better imaginary view of them as well. I learn best when i can picture the scene in my head.
2. I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to Bosley's essay in some way or another. It makes people feel as if they are not the only one with pressure in today's world. I think she tries to bring people up in spirit and tells them to go for their goals and dreams. You don't need to be in a beauty pageant to feel good about yourself.
3. What i liked most about your essay is the way you described every person you mentioned. The main suggestion i have about your essay is to explain more about your mother and hatred with fiance because that is a main focus on the essay and "why she didn't win the pageant".
4. She deffinately delivers this essay clearly, but in the beginning of the essay, it makes the reader feel as if she is going to deffinately win the pageant. The fact that there was a twist on it is good. The main point of her essay is to share to us to go after our goals in life and trying makes a difference. She loses the pageant because she didn't tell the judges what they wanted to hear.
Exploring Ideas
2. Pageants and competitions in public society are not always as "fair" as they should be. The questions given want responses that are "the same as everyone else".
3. I am an art major student, but i dont have "that look" of an artsy person. People tend to question if i really am because i dont "look" or "dress" like some who is interested in art.
Ideas for Writing
1. My senior year i played tennis and for our last game we played Westfield. Our season was better than usual and we didn't think we were going to win. But in my game i won the first set out of three and lost the second. We had high hopes for the third game and deffinately thought we could win. But we lost and it was dissapointing.
2. We had a junior awards night at my highschool with all juniors who were recieving awards but didn't know what award it was. They called my name for the Most Outstanding in Art Junior award. I was not expecting that.